ANNIVERSARY DINNER

socs-badgeFROM  SATURDAY STREAM OF CONCIOUSNESS

http://lindaghill.com/2014/11/07/the-friday-reminder-and-prompt-for-socs-november-814/

Prompt was bat, bet, bit, bot, but ( this was hard and it’s certainly a free write all the way…I’d change a lot of it!)

Anniversary Dinner

But you never look at me
when we talk
we eat
we go out to a party,

she said and scooped out his eyeball,
plopped  it  onto the olive pate and served it to him.

Bet you still haven’t washed
my baseball uniform
my gym bag
my plaid pants I love,

he said and cut off  her hands
fed them to her one at a time

Bats are more romantic than you
she said and carved out his heart

Bit by bit you’ve torn us apart
he said, took a steak knife and returned the favor.

Bot a ciggie from you?
the waiter asked as he cleaned up the blood,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8 thoughts on “ANNIVERSARY DINNER

  1. Perfectly creepy and wonderfuly violent, I love it! It’s like you took that prompt, stewed it in Stephen King’s blood and served it up to us in a nice delicious poem. Thank you 🙂

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